Rough Cut feedback

S2-53
We really didn't get it. Some of the sequences did not make any sense. No soundtrack. There were parts with no noise at all. Good acting through-out the first 2-3 minutes. The killing sequence was too long an was unrealistic. Good camera work (angles/close-ups).


S2-54
The editing at the start is too quick. But very good angles and close ups. For the kill part of it it could be a fast edit. We think that the kill sequence is realistic if you could edit it fast it would look better. You probably haven't started a soundtrack but it does need one.

S2-49:

We think we that you have got some really good shots from the footage we have seen , especially in the torture/killing scene. You should include a sound track for the sequence, because you have no dialogue and this would help to build tension also. You could include diegetic sound as well for parts such as when the man has the bag over his head and is trying to get out. Maybe you should try and create more mystery.

We think that it would be good with more editing.

S2-50:
We think that the killing scene should be short and sharp to create more suspence. There are some very good and effective shots. Particularly, the shots of the feet, both when walking and when the character is being attacked. The newspaper clippings are not all relevent to the rest of the sequence, for example there is a shot of a frontpage which doesnt link in with the sequence.

S2-51 Feedback:
First 30 seconds well done, a nice selection of shots. During editing i would like to see some nice short shorts to create tension.When making q soundtrack make sure that it builds up and is conitusly adding to the atmosphere.