response to feedback

Thank you everyone for the good feedback.

First of all we agree that our killing scene needs to be more quick paced to create suspense and disagree with the point about of not making a soundtrack, we just haven't added it yet.
improvements we need to make is more editing as it clearly stated. this will in turn make the sequence shorter as its too long. We may also take out certain scenes that was said to have no relevance to the narrative. Our soundtrack will also be added causing it to be more suspenseful to the audience.
It is important to get feedback as it gives us a view on if we're reached out to our target audience, having the views and opinions on others will allow us to make changes to the sequence to make it even more suspenseful.